Rainy Day in Paris by Gustave Caillebotte, 1877 |
Recently I asked them to work with their stories, adding a few similes using the worksheet I created below. Here are some of the examples my fourth and fifth grade students added to their stories, the simile portions are underlined.
- So he took out his slingshot and shot the sparrow with the aim of a skilled archer.
- With the roar of a lion he demanded to know how he had become rich so suddenly.
- As quick as a squirrel the older brother began to climb, and climb, and climb.
- The woods were as dark as an evil castle.
- She went home as sad as a dog without food.
- As softly as a mouse she asked her, “Do you see him? Do you see my brother?”
- Her face healed as fast as butter melted.
- In days long ago, the sky was as close to Earth as a little boy is to his mother.
It was a good exercise for
them to further visualize details about their characters and setting
Please feel free to use the worksheet below in your personal work with your students. Permission for private use is granted. Distribution, either electronically or on paper is prohibited without written permission. (Please refer to full copyright statement at the end of the blog post.)
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3 comments:
This is great Karen. Very creative.
Let me know if you'd be OK with me using some of your ideas (with full credit to you) with some of my adult storytelling students.
Hi Connie,
I would be honored to have you use some of my ideas. Thank you for asking.
Karen
Thanks!
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